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Big Write!

Today we had to re-draft our big write that we wrote last week our teacher Mrs Read was proud of me because I used the word Zealous.We had to write a story about a swing that was moving in the middle of no-where.

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2 thoughts on “Big Write!

  1. Izobel Humphries on said:

    You have a good story there.

  2. James on said:

    You can use opener’s in your story and make your story longer.And you have used connectives.

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